A very strong example of digital narrative developed from a tiny seed of thought. I like the voice over element and the continuous movement on the page. This is not just telling the story of one bear, it is telling the conceptual story of what the bear stands for and everything else surround human society and how we live. I like the graphic stats meets real life filming as both offer strong visual contrast from online and offline. The negatives with this piece is that there is a feeling of anti climax, like you are waiting for something major to happen and for all to be revealed but instead it just plays on and on and you never quite get to the end of it. This would put some viewers off and make them switch over straight away which I want to avoid.